My Family
My dad's name is Adrian and his favourite food is kina. His favourite colour is red also his favourite flower is a rose. He likes dogs because they are fun to play with. His favourite thing to do is go to the pub and hang out with his friends. He loves his family and his favourite movies are Opal Hunters, gold hunters and Underworld. My dad was born in 1986.
My mum's name is Jasmine and her favourite colour is blue. Her favourite flower is a rose and her favourite food is strawberries also she likes bees and her favourite animal is a dog. Her favourite game to play is place 10 and her favourite movie is Underworld. She also likes to go to the pub with her friends.
I got 5 Dogs 2 horses and 3 chickens my five dogs names is DJ Luxe Missil Tinkerbell and Pixie my horses names are Mocha and Pancho my chickens names are picky Snowflake and brownie.
My brother's name is Carlos and his favourite thing to do is play on his PS4 he likes to eat kinas and his favourite animals are dogs his favourite flowers are also roses and he gots lots of friends His job is to pick up dog poop and he bees mean to me.
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