WALT- plan a narrative following this structure: introduction of setting and characters, problem and solution.
Reflection- I enjoyed writing this narrative because i like to use my imagination.
star-I like the fact that my character is nice and has a good heart.
wish-I wish that my narrative could be longer but other then that its amazing.
Kia ora Leah, I loved reading your narrative! It had a lovely moral or message behind it! I wonder if you could add some direct speech into your story between the bunnies and include their replies?
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Miss Reihana
Hey Leah, that was a nice piece of writing. I like the story you have gone with and I agree, it may have started as a joke but then it turned very bad for him. I guess the moral is very fitting for your story. Also what format have you used to post it on your blog, it's come out rather strange hasn't it? Anyway keep the creative thoughts flowing, ka pai.
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