W.A.L.T: to use descriptive words to make our writing more interesting.
We did this piece of writing to practice using descriptive words and language
The stripey zebra lept anxiously in the jungle🐗
The shine pond swirled quickly.
To stars and a wish
I like the ways that I had moving pictures and i also like the way how I put it in order.
my wish is that I could do more work.💕
Kia Ora Leah, I like the moving pictures too!
ReplyDeleteYou taught me some really good descriptive writing.
Maybe use some capital letters, sorry if I hurt your feelings because I don't mean to.
Hi Leah, I really like your blog post.My favourite pic is the zebra. why did you put gifs? from olive
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